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Saturday, Nov 17, 2007

HAPPYNESS

Happyness is when

You have Someone,

Somone that you really

Care about that you Love,

But its not just that its when you

have Friends,

Friends that care about you

That Love you.

That is what makes you happy

That makes you care

Its somone that you

Love alot and they Love You.

FREEDOM

Im locked up,

Locked up from the

whole world with

No one to see me

Will someone

Rescue me

Will someone come

That is my Hope

That is my Dream

For someone to come

For someone to rescue me.

Then you come

You dont know me

But you still take me in

You still Love me,

Will i stay like this Forever

By your side.

That is my new Dream

My new Hope

That ill be able to Stay here

With you,

To be with you Forever.

But now i have to go

To were i came from

Iv stayed here to

Long.

Stayed with you to

Long.

I have to go now

I have to leave you now.

Ill say

Good Bye Forever.

Why do i run away

Why do i always run away

from the Truth.

I dont want to go

But if i Stay you will

Be hurt

You will be destroyed.

So i have to Leave

I have to leave you.

I love you

You love me

Why do we have to

seperate.

You Hold me

You Kiss me

But you know i have

to go.

so for now

we have to seperate

We have to be Apart

But i know Someday we

Will see each other Again,

So for now i say

Good Bye

My Love,

My Friend,

My Joy.


Love Yuki,thx for reading

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yay another poem. It was so beautiful...
Posted Nov 17, 2007 10:02 pm PT
one tip for your poems, make each line(phrase?) a little longer, or put them together, but nice anyway...
Posted Nov 18, 2007 6:00 am PT
thank you shad

yah i know what you mean but this is how usally i see them witten(this shape)
Posted Nov 20, 2007 11:37 am PT
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