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Wednesday, Aug 20, 2008

Here's an excerpt from the story I'm on,

The Templar Of Light

Chapter 13: The Templar Of Light

"Friends and dear humans,

Come I thither, to impart to thine years,

The lore of my long lived years,

Heed me well,

Therein does the ancient wisdom dwell

Eons ago, when the Earth was still new,

Flourish'd all races of the sixth sinew,

The Humans, the dwarves, the rowels, the dodans, the elves

And the others living in deeper dvelves,

Harmoniously did they live,

Bound'd by oth of love,

Lorded by the Templars of Light,

Heralders of peace, foes of fight,

Lived men, free of spirit,

Ruled bynone of a feudal merit,

Sheperded by one'w own kith,

Evaded the doom of war and death,

Sharp shone the sword,

Gleaming like the very crown of Gods,

Own'd by the Templars of Light,

Loan'd power and might"

This is posted on a request by lightwarrior, who was apparently interested in my story from the beginning...

Please give your feedback...

Posted by vedicpi, 5:35am
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Pretty good,dude. Interesting prophetic lines from your story.
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