Thursday, Oct 22, 2009
We Had Nothing
We know it was a mistake,
Especially back then,
When everything was wonderful,
Like a dream come true,
It's time to be clear,
You never loved me.
Chorus
We had nothing,
No more acting,
Never together,
Just fakeness,
I wanted something real,
But you never gave it to me.
Now everytime you're with her,
It really really hurts,
She has something I wanted to,
Yeah, I'm talking about you,
Finally you're honest with me,
You are admiting it.
Chorus
I don't know what I'll do right now,
I'm feeling like I'm breaking down,
Maybe I want you back,
Get what we didn't have,
I want to try.
Chorus (x2)
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Well, guys, now PLEASE tell me what do you think about the song AND I NEED to know if there's any grammar mistake or something like that 
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AND you have to write what you think the song is about AND the one who gets closer to the result (the longest, the best and the real one), will get a SUPER ESPECIAL SURPRICE!!! Don't worry, it will be a different pic 
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Well, see ya pals!!!
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Posted Oct 23, 2009 3:35 am PT
Great song. You definitely have a talent for song writing.
Posted Oct 23, 2009 3:58 am PT
Hmmm, it looks like the to needs an extra o to make it too. Also you're missing a t in admitting. 
admiting --> admitting. Oh and Surprice I believe is spelled Surprise. Can;t wait to see that cool picture! 
Great song by the way, I thought it was a good love-themed one. *Gives you another round of applause.* I guess I'll describe what I think the song is about short, sweet, and to the point. Its about you finding love and wanting something you used to have, you are not sure if you want your old relationship back with the guy you used to hang out with, and it hurts you seeing him with another woman. Back then you found out him loving you was all an act, and if you ever get together with him again, you want the love to be real.
admiting --> admitting. Oh and Surprice I believe is spelled Surprise. Can;t wait to see that cool picture! Great song by the way, I thought it was a good love-themed one. *Gives you another round of applause.* I guess I'll describe what I think the song is about short, sweet, and to the point. Its about you finding love and wanting something you used to have, you are not sure if you want your old relationship back with the guy you used to hang out with, and it hurts you seeing him with another woman. Back then you found out him loving you was all an act, and if you ever get together with him again, you want the love to be real.
Posted Oct 23, 2009 12:00 pm PT
Good song
Posted Oct 23, 2009 3:44 pm PT
I think the song (which was very good, by the way) is about a girl who...wait, I just read Nightmare_Fan17's comment: whatever they said!
Posted Oct 23, 2009 4:16 pm PT
*achem*
This song-yet-to-be is a reflection down memory lane considering your current made up or non made up feelings bonding within your memory which all together slash right through them iddle of father history leaving at least parts of your comprehention in that imperfect image of what has happened, which perspectig subjectively engages a flood of impulses or emotions if you will within your system, leaving you witihn a triceful twilight in which you fool only your very self that you do actually have a clue of what richness you feel flowing through, yet nobody amongst us does, thus resulting in clash of feelings followed by peer preasuerd thoughts put into two(or more)-meaningful words, for nobody to comprenhend but your own voidless unconsciousness, while at the same presence self decieving that you know your deepest secrets, may it be love, or love for your friend.
This song-yet-to-be is a reflection down memory lane considering your current made up or non made up feelings bonding within your memory which all together slash right through them iddle of father history leaving at least parts of your comprehention in that imperfect image of what has happened, which perspectig subjectively engages a flood of impulses or emotions if you will within your system, leaving you witihn a triceful twilight in which you fool only your very self that you do actually have a clue of what richness you feel flowing through, yet nobody amongst us does, thus resulting in clash of feelings followed by peer preasuerd thoughts put into two(or more)-meaningful words, for nobody to comprenhend but your own voidless unconsciousness, while at the same presence self decieving that you know your deepest secrets, may it be love, or love for your friend.
Posted Oct 23, 2009 7:39 pm PT
Christina: Thank you!!!
Posted Oct 23, 2009 8:45 pm PT
stitch069917: Thank you soo much!!! . I was wondering if you could tell me your name...I would like to call you by your name, if you want, of course .
. I was wondering if you could tell me your name...I would like to call you by your name, if you want, of course .
Posted Oct 23, 2009 8:49 pm PT
Nightmare_Fan17: Thank you soooo much!!! I'll correct that right now . Thank you very much!!! . Wow, you totally got it, that's what my song talks about . I was wondering if you could tell me you name, so I can call you by your name , if you want, of course .
. Thank you very much!!! . Wow, you totally got it, that's what my song talks about . I was wondering if you could tell me you name, so I can call you by your name , if you want, of course .
Posted Oct 23, 2009 9:44 pm PT
Jasmine: Thank you!!!
Posted Oct 23, 2009 9:45 pm PT
Posted Oct 23, 2009 9:46 pm PT
spirit7someguy: WOW!!! That was soo brilliant and intelligent, but I didn't understand anything .
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Posted Oct 23, 2009 9:47 pm PT
I basically told you that you dont know what you wrote since nobody can explain love... I'm saying that you may think you understand your feeings, but in the end they are only a reflection of your uncertain view of world. a.k.a. you dont know the crap what you really meant by that song
Posted Oct 24, 2009 2:54 pm PT
Posted Oct 24, 2009 5:29 pm PT
spirit7someguy: Mmm...that's kinda true 
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Posted Oct 24, 2009 7:19 pm PT
Posted Oct 24, 2009 7:20 pm PT
Hi Karina! I like the song although I think it's a little short. You should add another part before or after the last two chorus'. The "She has something I wanted to, Yeah, I'm talking about you" part doesn't make sense, unless it was a typo and you meant to type 'too.' Um, I think it's about you and Pepe being together and everything was good, but in the end, he wasn't commited to the relationship like you were. Now that Pepe is with Denisse, you know that he can commit and it hurts. I don't know. I suck at analyzing stuff.
I like the song although I think it's a little short. You should add another part before or after the last two chorus'. The "She has something I wanted to, Yeah, I'm talking about you" part doesn't make sense, unless it was a typo and you meant to type 'too.' Um, I think it's about you and Pepe being together and everything was good, but in the end, he wasn't commited to the relationship like you were. Now that Pepe is with Denisse, you know that he can commit and it hurts. I don't know. I suck at analyzing stuff.
Posted Oct 24, 2009 9:00 pm PT
Ivy: Maybe I should, I've been thinking about that. Mmm...really? well, I was trying to say that I actually didn't have him, because he never acted like a boyfriend and with her everything is different, but maybe it doesn't sound right. More less , but you have the idea .
, but you have the idea .
Posted Oct 24, 2009 9:57 pm PT
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