hey, guys, i'm been working on a fanfiction for this project i ahve to do, now i aint too confident about things i write and i hate to ahve ppl i know look at stuff i write, but if i dont get someones oppinion on it i aint ewver gona be able to hand it in for the project now it is jsut a work in progress at the moment, and what i ahve wirtten so far is pretty much jsut jotted down so i dont forget it, and it will get edited later to make more of a story, but yeah, oppinions please.

Ok, heres what i have written so far, though i may warn i aint the best with grammar but i will have a friend look voer it before it gets submitted, and if i ahve mispelt anything or it seems like there is something missing blame word processor as i went threw the spell checker and jsut let it "correct everything" and id ont have time to check what it has messed with as i ahve to go bed in a minute but yeah everything will get fixed, so yeah here it is. or also the story itself is just gonna be so many words long as it is only for a short story thing, but if it is liked then i might adapt it into a full fanfiction for you guys. oh and i should mention it is themed on bonfire night, i had to choose a theme for it and seing as how november is coming up i choose bonfire night and sn.

Bonfire Day Parade.

Westminster

Yorkshire

5th of November 1605

Late at night Guy Fawkes stood waiting for the rest of the men so they could carry the explosives into parliament

403 years later

5th of November 2008

York Copmanthorpe Yorkshire

"Aaron"

"Aaron"

Elwyn shouted, loud enough for Aaron to hear but quiet enough not to disturb his parents,

Aaron her boyfriend was grounded, but they had made plans to hang out and she wasn't gonna let his parents get in the way of that.

"Aaron" she shouted again, she was just about to throw another stone at the window when he appeared,

"Hey, I'll be right there hold on," Aaron said.

"Hurry up I'm cold,"

Elwyn was 16, almost 17, Aaron was about to turn 18, and she loved him to death,

They'd been going out for a year; they'd met on this very night at the bonfire night parade,

Her little sister had died in the fire it was the saddest day of her life and he was there for her.

"Aaron hurry up! Where gonna be late,"

"I'm coming hold on"

She heard him stage an argument with his parents,

He slammed his bedroom door, then turned slipknots new album up really loud,

"They should stay out for a couple of hours if not till morning"

He started to climb down the guttering next to his window; he got half way then jumped down at her feet.

"Hey baby"

"Hey!"

She pushed him up against the wall and kissed him.

" Your such a bad boy Aaron James Thomson"

Come on we better go before they hear us" Aaron said

"Can they hear anything over your stereo?" Elwyn replied.

"Probably not but just incase let's go"

They ran down the driveway and around the corner to Elwyns

Personalised red and black 64" Cadillac sedan Deville.

It took 10 minutes to drive to the bonfire site; there they met up with

Elwyns sisters Alex and Sarah and Aaron's brother Jordan she was about to give them a hug when they set off the

First lot of fireworks,

"Yay fireworks, they'll be setting the fire soon, come on guys" Elwyn said.

She grabbed Aaron's hand and led them all to the big pile of wood; they found a dry spot of grass and sat down waiting for it to be

lit.

An hour later and the fire were just about burnt out and they were about to set off the last lot of fireworks.

" Where gonna go on some rides, and mom and dad are here to pick up Alex,

They want to know what you're doing?" Sarah asked.

Elwyn yawned, Aaron told Sarah he'd take her home and then asked if he could drive the Cadillac back to his

until morning.

Sarah okied this and said goodnight to them both,

November 1st

Bobbies house

Early hours of the morning

"Dude what we doing here? It's what 5AM? Will bobby even be awake." dean said as he got out of the car.

"Bobby said he has a case for us, and no he probably isn't awake," Sammy replied " and its 4 30 am"

"Awe man, I should be in bed! Said dean " so what we gonna do? Sneak in and wait for him to wake up?"

"Exactly"

Sam tried the front door, when it didn't open he started picking the lock, it took all of 2 minutes to pick it, just as Sam was about to try the door again

Bobby burst threw shotgun in hand.

" Woah bobby it's us" dean said " don't shoot"

"Dean? Bobby said "Sam? I thought you guys weren't meant to be here till tomorrow?"

"I know but we finished a case sooner then we thought" replied Sam.

"Oh" said bobby " well come in, come in"

"So, bobby, what's this case you have for us?"

Has either of you ever heard of Guy Fawkes night or bonfire night?

"No" said dean.

"Yeah" replied Sam, " its a British tradition to celebrate Guy Fawkes."

"Why?" said dean well munching on an apple pie" What did he do? Blow somebody up?"

Actually almost, he was apart of the gunpowder plot to blow up the house of parliament and kill king James 1st and VI and anyone else in the building at the time"

"Why?"

"cos they he didn't agree with them, Guy Fawkes was catholic, parliament didn't like Catholics, the plan was to kill King James and have his daughter

Become queen, as a catholic.

" Ok but what has that got to do with the case?"

" A friend of mine had a brother that was a hunter, he was on a case around this time last year, people had been dying in bonfires,

And there was a supernatural reason behind them, he died in house fire, " replied bobby.

"And this thing is still loose and your friend wants us to finish where his brother left off?" said dean.

"Exactly"

We'll get on it tomorrow right now I'm going bed" said dean.

Whets for breakfast?"

"Dean, its dinnertime" replied Sammy.

"Ok, whets for dinner then? Is there pie?

" You have a plane to catch in 2 hours, at 8pm, for England, York, you should be there for around 3am, though it will be 7pm there,

"Awe man planes"

"Get on the plane dean" said sam 2 hours later, " where late as it is thanks to you and your urge for burgers"

" I don't want to, and hey they were some good burgers" replied dean.

"I'll push you."

"Come on sam, you know I don't like flying."

"I'm sorry sir but where leaving in 10 minutes, please get on the plane or leave" said the female flight attendant.

" Are you gonna be on the plane?" replied dean.

"Yes sir"

"Then I'll get on the plane"

"Finally, thank you." said sam.

"Your welcome, sir. " said the flight attendant.

"Oh boy" said dean half an hour later. Why did I get on the plane?"

"Just listen to Metallica until we get off." replied sam.

"Good idea, " said Dean as he sticks in the earphones and turns the player up high.

"Dean can you hear me?"

"Hush little baby..."

7 hours later

York, Yorkshire.

England.

7am,

thats all i ahve so far, please dont be too harse, and remember this is jsut jotted down stuff i ahd in ym head for the story, ti will be editted