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Sunday, Sep 23, 2007

Okay, so I've been slacking. Here's the California Girls Pilot (if you need a refresher on the characters, just go to my previous blog post:

Scene: Scans over Huntington Beach, California. Ends on Huntington Beach Day School, where Cristina, Lindi, Zoe, Rachel, and Crystal are having lunch.

Cristina: I'm so excited for Homecoming tonight!

Lindi: Ugh, don't remind me, I have too much to do today.

Zoe: That comes with the territory of being student body president.

( Melenie and Paige approach the table )

Melenie: Hey girls. Lindi, we have some planning to do for tonight.

Lindi: Oh, yeah, sorry Mel, I forgot. Catch up with you guys later.

( Exit Melenie, Paige, and Lindi )

Crystal: I'm gonna go to the nurse, I'm not feeling well.

Rachel: Crys, you CAN'T miss the homecoming dance. You're going with Luke, aka the best boyfriend in the earth! Unless...

(Cuts off Rachel) Cristina: Nothings wrong between you too, right?

Crystal: Yes, EVERYTHING's fine with us, with me, I'm going to go home, take a nap, and I'll meet you guys at Paige's house for tonight.

Rachel: Whats her deal?

( Cuts to main office where Jazmin is sitting )

Jazmin: Hi, I'm Jazmin, I'm just moved here from Laguna.

Melissa: Hey, I'm Melissa, I'm a student aide in the office. And, I'll be your shadow today.

Jazmin: Cool, so do you like it around here?

Melissa: Uh...I get by.

Jazmin: So I heard homecoming was tonight, are you going.

Melissa: Sadly, yes, I'm treasurer on the student counsel and it's mandatory that I go. You should come too.

Jazmin: I don't have a ticket or a dress.

Melissa: I can get you a ticket, and you can borrow one of my dresses, people like me around here. (bumps into Girl)

Girl: Watch it freak!

Jazmin: Like you?

Melissa: Tolerate me.

(Cuts to store, Cloud9Clothing, where Tatiana and Lana are trying on dresses)

Tatiana: Do you like this one? ( Twirls in dress )

Lana: This wasn't worth skipping school for. All these dresses are the same, and ugly.

Tatiana: Lana, I want to impress Luke. I can't impress Luke in somefreshmen dress. I'm a sophmore now. I want Luke to know I'm more mature.

Lana: Look, Luke's a junior, and your still like a child to him, and he has a girlfriend, Crystal, remember?

Tatiana: Crystal's nothing compared to me.

( Cuts to Melenie's house. Paige & Her are getting ready for homecoming )

Paige: Melenie, you look great!

Melenie: You too, P. I just realized, this is our chance.

Paige: Our chance?

Melenie: To change our image.

Paige: How would we do that? Come in a revealing dress?

Melenie: No. I broke into my dad's drinking cabinet.

Paige: Mel, if were caught, we'll get expelled.

Melenie: The better the rep, then.

(Cuts to homecoming)

Cristina: Oh my gawd, Lindi, it looks amazing.

Lindi: Thanks, Cris.

John Andrew: There's my beautiful girlfriend (hugs Lindi)

Luke: Where's Crystal?

Cristina: She should be here soon.

Lindi: John, want to dance?

John: I'd love to.

( Cuts to Melenie & Paige with some senior guys completly drunk )

Melenie: This is way better than the dance.

Paige: And being good.

Mrs. Randolf: What is going on here? (senior guys run away)

Melenie: Uh-Oh.

Mrs. Randolf: My office. Now.

(cuts to Lindi & John)

John: Have I ever told you that I love you?

Lindi: Yes, you tell me every day.

John: And what do you say?

Lindi: I love you, too.

(Crystal enters wearing sweats)

Lindi: Crystal, your not dressed!

John: Yeah, Crys, Luke was looking for you.

Crystal: Oh, well I'm not staying, I just really need to talk to Lindi.

John: I get the hint.

( exit John while Crystal whispers in Lindi's ear )

(Cuts to Cristina sleeping and the phone rings)

Cristina: Hello?

( cuts to black and you hear sobbing )

Next episode of California Girls : COMING SOON !

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