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Thursday, Nov 12, 2009

opening: Last Resort - Papa Roach

(Rapier stood up and ran at his fake, only for his fake to punch him. Rapier dodged and kicked his fake in the stomach)

Rapier:He11 Yeah!

(His fake smiled as his Fake....started to conjur up another big hurricane! it got Rapier and flung him around the room, blood going everywhere. He was finnaly pinned to the ground from big wind. He closed his eyes, taking it all in)

Nec:giving up? Hahaha! Take THIS! Fake!

Fake Rapier:Right, I have infinate power...!

(His fake started throwing wind spears, which, after Rapier got up, hit rapier, pinning him to the wall. his fake quickly threw MORE wind at Rapier, Rapier falling to the ground, his eyes closed. It shows a small Spider shrinking in Rapiers mind. Rapier starts thinking(It shows this shot and shots of Rapier getting hit by wind while hes thinking): )

Rapier:*thinking* Well, I used to be like a spider before I got here, a Loner, only feeding off the ground, and what was there. I didn't have many friends, but now look, Im here, basically a super hero, fighting by all these people..no, fighting by all these friends. I'm here now, and I can control wind, and I've kicked my fair share of a$$es, and heres another to add. I can beat this lowlife, because I'll always be able to

(It shows a picture of acondor with folded wings for the next sentence(s))

Rapier:*thinking still* Because...I go with the sky, I fly with the sky...

(now it shows thecondor's wings unfolding)

Rapier:*thinking AGAIN* Wait...no, scruu that, I AM the sky!

(Rapier stands up, his eyes glowing violet as he smiled. He whipped out his staff with one hand, and a dagger in the other)

Rapier:Right now...I can win, because I'm strong, so heres how I supposrt the phrase "Paybacks a bi**h!"!

(Rapiers fake jumped at Rapier, who kicked him in the leg then slammed his staff at his stomach.Rapier went to stab the fake, but he disinagrated. Rapier, with his eyes now glowing red, glaring at Nec)

Rapier:You get to take the rest...

(Rapier leaped at Nec, who rolled out of the way. When Rapier tried to keep punching Nec, Nec kept dodging)

Nec:The best you got!? HA!

(Nex went to punch rapier, who whipped the staff at Nec, flinging him into a wall. Nec fell to the ground, then he tried to get up... Only for Rapier to be right there atm, and Rapier stabbed Nec in the arm)

Nec:Ah!

(Nec pulled out his sword)

Rapier:That rusty scrap-metal is not going to stop me, pitiful human

Nec:H-HUman? YOUR human...r-right?

(Rapier chuckled lightly, his eyes still glowing red)

Rapier:Human? hehehe...no, Im WAY past human...call me...your killer!

(When Nec was about to jump at Rapier with his sword... Nec fell to the ground, slashes and blood everywhere! and 2 big gashes on his arm and kneck, and then brush-burns everywhere else. Rapier chuckled lighlty again)

Rapier:too, too easy. I guess Im too fast hehehe

(Rapier went towords the exit, but right before he was gonna exit, his eyes turned normal, and he got a headache. He looked back, and saw Nec's lifeless body, and Rapier didn't feel all that pain anymore)

Rapier: Did....DId I do all this?!...AH, my head!

(Rapier held his head with one hand as he walked out and to the audience, the first one to be able to do so ())

(END)

Comments

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Awsome!! You're freally great at writing stories!
Posted Nov 12, 2009 3:22 pm PT
Aww thanks CF, your pretty good at writing (your spin off of course ) too
Posted Nov 12, 2009 3:24 pm PT
Amazing . Rapier is awesome.
Posted Nov 12, 2009 3:28 pm PT
Interesting. Crow... Sky... I'm starting to see something of a reference here...
Posted Nov 12, 2009 3:32 pm PT
Actually, the crow was a reference to Wiraqocha Rasqa (I actually think it was a raven though...I have to look it up ) and sky is reference ALSO to Wira and Rapiers powers...but I got the concept from what your getting at
Posted Nov 12, 2009 3:37 pm PT
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Posted Nov 12, 2009 3:47 pm PT
Aww, thanks so much ^_^
Posted Nov 12, 2009 4:20 pm PT
No prob CF
Posted Nov 12, 2009 4:46 pm PT
Wiraqocha Rasca is actually a condor.
Posted Nov 12, 2009 6:03 pm PT
Awesome Episode!
Posted Nov 12, 2009 7:46 pm PT
nice one!
Posted Nov 13, 2009 1:55 am PT
Cool Episode 24... I am the sky! Skies are pretty... I love the clear blue skies and the white fluffy clouds... Rapier is one cool name too. E Gad! Last Resort and Papa Roach!
Posted Nov 13, 2009 11:24 am PT
EDIT: I forgot Wira was the Condor, I just made the edit
Posted Nov 13, 2009 12:33 pm PT
Yeah NF... wats so bad about that song/band, it/they fu**ing rock
Posted Nov 13, 2009 1:07 pm PT
It's ummm...a bit gorey.And interesting.And uh...left me completely speechless.
Posted Nov 14, 2009 12:19 pm PT
Ill take that as a compliment marina But thanks for reading
Posted Nov 18, 2009 2:48 pm PT
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