This is a poem I wrote and I want your opinions.

The roaring fire

Singing and terring

The lies and uncaring

The body invisable

Lies unmoving

Unwealding

The inoccent one

Stands eyes gazing

Hoping

Praying

Only a dream

Only a dream

The building could colaps

Taking both

Unless the lies go first

Pain now touching

Burning agenst the emptyness

Surtanty builds

From the ashes of destruction

For it was clear the dissions

Facing the damp eyes of inoccence

The pages of an untold diary

Flys open

The truth is now known to both

Now the pain may begin to end.