http://putstuff.putfile.com/46813/5972217
Listed above is the document I sent to Adam in January. While I have made many changes to it since then, and now it is a much better proposal, it still doesn't change the fact that the document I sent in wasn't good enough to make the top ten this year. It's rather upsetting to tell you the truth, but I'm trying to cope. It's both saddening yet very uplifting that Oilers99, DFAD's most prolific contestant, who has been in the top ten in every contest from the beginning, did not make the top ten. This shocks me, since his documents have been fantastic, and he thought this was his best. So, the only thing I can say now to myself is better luck next year, if I can even think of another game idea, since my mind has been so attached to my screenplay(s) lately, that I'm slipping farther and farther from what it takes to make a video game idea.
Good night all, I'm going to bed.