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Saturday, Mar 8, 2008
Scorch my skin and slice my flesh,
and no,
before you ask,
I'm not depressed,
I'm just... going through a rough patch,
Bleeding let's out so much more than tears,
I'm just going through a rough patch,
...been going through it for years.

"It's just a little cut", He said,
"it's not as if I have a problem".
"There's no harm in it at all", He said,
"when I have issues, this resolves them".

"At least I'm not on drugs", He said,
"or other such unhealthy vices".
"I'm not hurting anyone", He said,
"so leave me to my own devices".

"It's awful nice, you know", He said,
"a spiritual kind of thing".
"A little cut, that's all", He said,
"then relish in that searing sting"

"I need that sweet release", He said,
"but it's not like I'm addicted".
"I could choose to stop", He said,
"but then I'd feel restricted".

"I'm trapped inside this skin", He said,
"it's itchy and too tight for me".
"I need to bleed again", He said,
"it's just a little cut, you see".

"I think I cut too deep", He said,
as his blood gushed to the floor.
"It was just a little cut", He said,
and then he said no more.
Posted by mirador1987, 11:48am
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that is really good Mir. i love the way that you have him saying it.
Posted Mar 8, 2008 11:57 am PT
Mir this is an amazing poem/song.. I always admire poets who can actually make good rhymes (all my stuff is non rh yming free verse because I can't), plus the emotion in this is intense and geniuine as well. Well done
Posted Mar 8, 2008 12:16 pm PT
Really excellent!
Posted Mar 11, 2008 7:23 pm PT
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