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Monday, Sep 3, 2007

From Time to time, when im listening to music, i get the beat stuck in my head and start rewriting the song in my own words. I recently did this rap, from the beat of LASTONESLEFT-2pac....CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WELCOMED

I got my back against the wall
but i still stand tall
ill fight all these suckas
b4 they make me fall
u gotta watch out for dat hook
it'll make ur body shake
just be true and real
cuz i dont like fakes
im coming down hard
all i want is respect
no matter hwo many of these suckas fall
ill be the last one left!

i live my life to da fullest
and i dont hold back
ball up on dese suckas
who they think they bad
competition aint no worries
i got my skillz right here
trick yo head so bad
ill leave you crying in fear
u wanna step up
you better bring some game
be the true homie
not like fakers, so lame
give respect to earn it
be loyal, dont betray
cuz wen u mess wit me
there aint no other way
get your facts right
and make da right moves
but if u mess up
ill leaving you blazing foo!
youll feel what i felt
i wont even stress
ur gonna be da one dying
ill be that last one left!

Category: Music
Posted by maddnica23, 3:15pm
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Eh... you could use some work. Ok start though. I can rap to
Posted Sep 3, 2007 3:43 pm PT
rap something
Posted Sep 3, 2007 3:44 pm PT
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