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Thursday, Dec 4, 2008

My story has now moved to it's own "outside" blog, where it has started from the beginning again.

It's currently at Chapter 7.

The address is Curse Of The Mannequin - The Wesley Gabriel Story

or http://curseofthemannequin.blogspot.com/ for those of you who can't click the link (if anyone is interested in reading it)

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Monday, Jun 2, 2008
My story has now taken a couple of months break, I guess you had noticed that I haven't posted any new parts recently. It will be back later this summer, although I can't pick an exact date for it yet
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Monday, May 12, 2008
Part 32

Matt and Gabriel had just arrived at Gabriels place. The girls were done eating breakfast, and were sitting in the couch watching a rerun of "The Bold and the Beautiful". It was pretty much the only thing that was on at the moment, so they had decided that it was better than nothing, since they didn't have time to watch an entire movie.

Gabriel decided to tell them all about the party invite that he had recieved from Mary. The party was at six at her place, and that he should call her later that day to see if they all could come. Fiona and Jackie exchanged a look, in which they both let each other know that they didn't want to go. They didn't like Mary at all. She had always been really annoying to them, and to others as well.

One time, in the locker room after gym she had stolen this other girl Samantha's underwear, because she had a skirt on and it was a really windy day. Since she was the first one out of the locker room, noone else had noticed it until they realized that she, and the underwear, were the only things that were gone from the room. Of course she had told the boys as quickly as she could as well, so when Samantha left the locker room she had a bunch of boys following her around every time she got outside that day, trying to get a glimpse of her private parts.

Another time, back in high shcool, she had been in a little fight with this other girl, Michelle. Michelle was one of the head cheerleaders, so she had never hesitated to tell Mary what she thought about her weight. This, of course, had made Mary angry, so that must have been what really put her over the edge that 150th time Michelle had been a total b!tch. Mary was a little bigger than Michelle, both in height and in muscle power, so she didn't have any problems when it came to physical fights between them. And even better for Mary, she sure knew how to fight dirty. So that particular time, in the cafeteria, she hadn't hesitated for a second.
Michelle was a bit behind Mary in line, so Mary had had time to sit down and put her tray on the table. That way she had been able both to plan her revenge, and to get both of her hands free, for quicker execution. She excused herself from the table, then quickly moved towards the end of the line.
- "Have you already eaten up pig? Save the rest of us some food, why don't ya?", Michelle said.
That pushed Mary over the edge. Since Michelle had just gotten her food plate and was moving towards the table, Mary thought that she should be an easy target. She snook up on Michelle and yanked her skirt down to her ankles, and before Michelle had time to put the tray down and hike up her skirt, Mary pushed her. Being helpless, Michelle fell head first into a chair that was pulled out at the nearest table. Before she had time to gain her balance, Mary jumped on top of her back and started pulling her hair. This was of course very appreciated by the boys in the cafeteria. They cheered the fight, and Michelle was blushing and trying to free herself, so she could at least pull her skirt back up. But Mary didn't let her free until the teachers showed up and pulled her away.
Michelle was the laughing stock of the entire school, and decided to change schools after that semester.

And that was just two of the times that Fiona came to think of right now, there was probably a whole lot of other stories as well. But she didn't want anything to do with Mary, and apparently neither did Jackie.
- "I think I'll just stay here and do something with Jackie on saturday. Besides that, I think the both of you could need to have some fun away from us", Fiona said with a wink.

Gabriel didn't say anything, but that was exactly the way he had wanted her to answer.
Matt and Jackie left, and Gabriel headed for bed.
Fiona decided to tell him what had happened after he got up, instead of giving him a lot to think about just before he was about to sleep.
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kempelito must really love MovieTome and agree with every review we've ever written! What other reason could kempelito possibly have for not rating a single film?
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