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Wednesday, Dec 7, 2005
softball is alot of fun
on the field is where I like to be
feeling proud of myself when i make a catch
trying my hardest is what matters
being the best that I can be
always running as fast as I can
learning how to get better everyday
lots of fun is what softball is

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Beautiful poem...4 stars!
Posted Dec 7, 2005 7:46 pm PT
Awesome. I give it 5 stars!
Posted Dec 7, 2005 8:04 pm PT
*In Simon Cowell voice*:

"That was simply dreadful!" Haha, jk, Sarah. Nice poem. Good to see another blog from you.
Posted Dec 8, 2005 3:21 am PT
thanks guys that was really nice of all of you
Posted Dec 8, 2005 1:11 pm PT
Sarah.. ur poems are so beautiful!! *applauds* I see u bein a poet in your career.. it was simply amazing!!! Great job!
Posted Dec 9, 2005 6:29 am PT
C'était une belle poésie.
Very good. A lot better than the one's i've had to write for English.
Posted Dec 17, 2005 1:52 pm PT
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