ll heyWhat a blog…hopefully you'll love what I've got in store for you…
I'd just like to say that im starting a competition for you all to compete in!
The idea of this comp is to guess the song name and artist from the lyrics given. The person who gets both the artist and song name will get a point. Simple enough.
So here goes…. See if you can get this one!
(If no-one gets it ill give hints.
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"….Cant none o ya mirror me back when ya hear me rap…." (Heres a bit more of it.)
"….Now what da hell are you waitin for…."
Now how are you all? Are you well? My lifes going ok I guess. Any interesting news from all of you? ![]()
Anyway just thought id get your opinions on this story im writing….
This is the start of my story….its pretty lame but anyway…. ![]()
"Why did you do that?" The man growled at the boy who stole his freshly baked bread. "Why?!" He yelled. "I asked you a question boy and I demand an answer!" The overly skinny boy just stood there, white as a ghost shaking like a tree in a storm. He was an odd looking boy, with pure blonde, wispy hair and liquid brown eyes. He was the palest boy the man had ever seen and what a state he was in, covered in dirt and grime and dressed in something that resembled rags more than clothes. And yet, he still didn't say a word.
So what do you think? If youi want to criticise im happy to accept…id love to improve on it! ![]()
So…Gibozzo offered a great idea for my blog and it's a TOP 5 LIST!!!!
So here goes.
Top 5- Jobs that I want to do as a career! ![]()
1- Surgeon (people)
2- Forensic Scientist (cutting up dead people.
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3- Forensic Investigator (like FBI)
4- Veterinarian surgeon ![]()
5- Sports teacher!
I think ill do a top 5 in every blog from now on ok? ![]()
Now as for some icons! ![]()


Now some of my favourite pictures of random and not so random stuff to finish it off! ![]()












Comments
OK, so great blog.
No clue about the song but, well, I'm over twice your age and across a very big ocean so I doubt we listen to the same music.
Loved the start of the story. But, as a creative writing major in my undergrad years I have one comment. "Shaking like a tree in a storm" is a bit of a cliche simile. It's been so overused that it's somewhat lost its impact. You might want to think about a simile with trembling. It's a less common word and possibly more interesting. (Just my opinion of course). Otherwise, the opening is quite engaging and begs to be read.
Great blog!
As to your story, I have to agree with Shazz about that line. It is a bit overused and has lost its punch. The rest is really good and makes me want to know where the rest of the story is headed. Can't wait to read more.
Loved the blog!
I think it's a great idea for a game! I must say, I have no idea what song it is....
I really liked the beginning of the story as well! I agree with mscraftee and shazz about the expression, shaking like a tree in the storm, but for the rest it was awesome and it really made want to read the rest of it! I see you like cutting people!
I loved all the pics! So many yummy man, and lots of funny pics with that as well!
Have an awesome week!
*hugs!*
OMG! I love these pics!!
Can I keep one? Can I keep one?
PLEASE????
The story sounds interesting. I want to know what's going to happen with the boy or maybe with the man.
While reading your top 5 jobs, I thought about Bones. Do you watch this show about a forensic anthropologist? It's a great show!
Nice pictures and nice icons (specially those Jensen ones
Have a nice week!
*huge hugs*
You just want to cut things up don't you
And nice pics, love the one with the chipmunk and Jensen.
Check ya around!!
JP, JA, MW, AOL goodness! Mmmmm thank-you indeed
Extra mmm mmmm mmmm's for Jensen!
Anyway I'm not good with songs so I'm just gonna return to drooling at the Jensen pics
yes i highly doubt we do!
thanks for the help on my story!
**jensen hugs**
yes i do just want to cut things.
yes the flying cat!!!
tw is gorgeous...seriously...but nothing tops jensen.
i really want to be a surgeon though...no.1 always.
i wonder who that certain someone could be eh suze?
flying kitty loose! look out!!!!
luv ya suze!!!
**jensen yummy hugs**
love da i first random pic!!!!
Hot guys are very yummy to drool over especially Jensen. LMAO at the flying cat in the boat.
hikinggirl!!!!
flying cat is so awesome!
TheShazz