I'm Level 6 already and I haven't done this yet... posting messages, I mean. So here I go.
I've been a Doctor Who fan since I first saw the revived series... in other words April 2008 (I am not from anywhere around UK, USA or Australia and the show isn't broadcasted here) and have been quite obssesed with the Doctor and his adventures since then... ![]()
So, last Friday I just sat in front of the computer and put down in words a tiny bit of my inspiration. English in hardly my native language but i've been studing it since I was about 8 (I am 16 now) and consider myself capable enough to write a few things... even get poetic
. Nevertheless, I have to apologize in advance for any mistakes I had made... Please do tell me if you find any, I'll be very grateful.
So here is one Doomsday inspired poem from Rose's point of view
Incomplete
I could see perpetuity slipping through your eyes
And this is when you held my hand so tight, it hurt
You let go, looked away and then I open eyes before new foreign skies
A charm is lifted now and the fairy dust is gone, there's only dirt
I could feel a piece of me was incomplete...
Your name was sealed on my lips and ur ghost scattered in my mind
Sorrow crushes me inside, I don't remember how long I have cried
And then an ache pierced me so cruel, I felt it broken - our bind
A mighty force pulled our paths apart and put a distance wide
And left me incomplete...
On the razor blade the spell "Forever" was engraved
Like an old photo ripped in two, the victim - me and you
But there is no magic glue, there is no you
Yet your scent still trembles in the air along your timeless glow so fair
With painful memories is my blue shirt replete, them I can't defeat
Oh, I am so incomplete...
Now 12 o'clock is hours past, Like Cinderella, my fairytale couldn't last
But I have nothing left to remind me of this dream, not even enchanted shoe
Still I know I left sth in your flying box, precious and as fragile as a glass
The missing piece torn for Fate's caprice and treasured furtively by you
Now I know why I am incomplete...
I have only half of heart left to beat



