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Tuesday, Sep 2, 2008

I'm Level 6 already and I haven't done this yet... posting messages, I mean. So here I go.

I've been a Doctor Who fan since I first saw the revived series... in other words April 2008 (I am not from anywhere around UK, USA or Australia and the show isn't broadcasted here) and have been quite obssesed with the Doctor and his adventures since then...

So, last Friday I just sat in front of the computer and put down in words a tiny bit of my inspiration. English in hardly my native language but i've been studing it since I was about 8 (I am 16 now) and consider myself capable enough to write a few things... even get poetic . Nevertheless, I have to apologize in advance for any mistakes I had made... Please do tell me if you find any, I'll be very grateful.

So here is one Doomsday inspired poem from Rose's point of view

Incomplete

I could see perpetuity slipping through your eyes

And this is when you held my hand so tight, it hurt

You let go, looked away and then I open eyes before new foreign skies

A charm is lifted now and the fairy dust is gone, there's only dirt

I could feel a piece of me was incomplete...

Your name was sealed on my lips and ur ghost scattered in my mind

Sorrow crushes me inside, I don't remember how long I have cried

And then an ache pierced me so cruel, I felt it broken - our bind

A mighty force pulled our paths apart and put a distance wide

And left me incomplete...

On the razor blade the spell "Forever" was engraved

Like an old photo ripped in two, the victim - me and you

But there is no magic glue, there is no you

Yet your scent still trembles in the air along your timeless glow so fair

With painful memories is my blue shirt replete, them I can't defeat

Oh, I am so incomplete...

Now 12 o'clock is hours past, Like Cinderella, my fairytale couldn't last

But I have nothing left to remind me of this dream, not even enchanted shoe

Still I know I left sth in your flying box, precious and as fragile as a glass

The missing piece torn for Fate's caprice and treasured furtively by you

Now I know why I am incomplete...

I have only half of heart left to beat

Posted by enigmangel, 12:47pm
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