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Friday, Nov 2, 2007

Chapter 4 may seem odd, but I assure you, it's okay.

Read this after you at least read half of chapter 4

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Chapter 4 of 6

"Remember five years ago or so when I threw that spear at you?" A man asked Dustin.

"Yes I remember Malik, had you not spoke English I would have teleported all over the place trying to avoid you." Dustin said after drinking a glass ofwater.

"How's your training coming along by the way?" Malik asked. Dustin started to frown.

"Horrible, I've become an expert on blinking. But that one technique I used to get here, has been eluding me ever since. And I've only used a couple of other techniques as well. horribly I might add." Dustin replied ashamed.

"I'm sure you'll get the hang of it." Malik said reassuring Dustin.

"I can't even get to America I always teleport in the water and my instincts force me to teleport back here." Dustin said sadly

"Why do you want to go back? You told me it was a horrible place." Malik responded.

"It was but Thompson can't still be looking for me. Okay last time I checked the year was 2003 and from what I know-." Dustin started.

"Actually it turned 2004, four months ago." Malik said interrupting Dustin.

"Anyway, Thompson probably has better things to do, like hunt other people like me." Dustin said.

"Other people?" Malik asked.

"Yes, I believe there are other people with powers out there. Thompson seemed to think so." Dustin said.

"I guess you'll be the one that got away. Oh I heard from some one in town, that two rich Americans are touring these parts. I believe their last name is Rutger." Malik replied.

Dustin paused momentarily.

"Rich people with the last name Rutger?" Dustin asked in disbelief.

"Yes why? What's wrong?" Malik asked as he stood up.

"My parents' last name was Rutger, and they were rich." Dustin replied with a look of disbelief.

"Your name is Dustin Rutger?" Malik asked surprised.

"No, legally I have no last name, another thing I hate about my parents." Dustin said coldly.

"I'm sure there was a reasonable explanation." Malik said stretching.

"Yeah, they were selfish, evil maniacal, selfish rich people." Dustin responded.

"Isn't there something you like about them?" Malikasked stretching his arms.

"Nope, well they were rich, but it was because they were rich that I hate them." Dustin said with his arms crossed.

Well, Dustin you can always ask them for the money they owe you." Malik said as he ran out of the hut.

"Actually Malik I have a better question to ask them." Dustin said mostly to himself. Dustin got up and went to look for his parents.

"Dear. Would you hold this for me?" A woman asked her husband.

"Why certainly." The man replied.

"Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Rutger, I'm here to help you on your tour," Dustin said as he walked out of the bushes.

"Why thank you good man, it's nice to know someone around here speaks English," Mr. Rutger said looking at something else.

"Well I'm not really from around here." Dustin responded. Mr. Rutger looked at Dustin, and after a moment fell out of his seat. Mrs. Rutger who still hadn't looked at Dustin went to pick up her husband.

"What's wrong, dear?" Mrs. Rutger asked Mr. Rutger. Mr. Rutger shakily pointed at Dustin. Mrs. Rutger looked at Dustin who tripped and fell on her husband.

"Well, hello Mother and Father, it's nice to know you recognize me." Dustin said.

"Dustin, but how, they told us you'd died?" Mrs. Rutger responded.

"Yes and what you moved on, like nothing happened?" Dustin said getting angry.

"Now listen here, boy, we did everything for you, as best as we could, given our circumstances." Mr. Rutger said snobbishly.

"Oh I was fine, until you fired Flora and sent me to that hellhole." Dustin snapped back. "You know I've always wondered something, was I adopted?"

"What? No of course not! Why would we adopt you?" Mr. Rutger angrily replied. Dustin blinked closer to his parents.

"That's why!" Dustin yelled causing his parents to run off. Dustin started to laugh, but an extreme blanket of guilt rushed over him.

"What's that racket?" A familiar voice yelled out. A man stepped out and locked eyes with Dustin.

"Billy!" Dustin yelled in surprise.

"Actually I go by the name of John Booster now. So Dustin, want to see a light show?"

Category: Writing
Posted by dman_dustin, 3:24pm
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I totally can't wait for number 5.
Posted Nov 2, 2007 4:09 pm PT
Dman it seems like you rushed this story just to introduce John Booster and make Dustin somehow meet his parents I'm no critic and i really like your stories but this one like you said was weird
Posted Nov 3, 2007 2:04 am PT
Eh, nothing happened in those 5 years, and John Booster does help Dustin realise he's supposed to be a hero (kind of)
Posted Nov 3, 2007 5:54 am PT
I knew this wasn't going to go over well
Posted Nov 8, 2007 4:16 am PT
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