Monday, Mar 5, 2007
Sorry i haven't put on any poems lately! This one is through dean's eyes based on his feelings towards john's death in crossroad blues, i haven't edited it yet so sorry if there are any mistakes! and plz let me know if theres n e thing i should change! thanks!
Did you do it consumed in fear?
Or couldn't you bear the pain?
Were you too scared to shed a tear?
Too scared to see my blood stain?
Did you really do if for me?
Or couldn't you bear to know,
How different the world would be,
Without you son, but with sorrow?
So you got me back my soul,
But not without a cost,
It was you that he stole,
And now my life is lost,
Did you do it consumed in fear?
Or couldn't you bear the pain?
Were you too scared to shed a tear?
Too scared to see my blood stain?
Did you really do if for me?
Or couldn't you bear to know,
How different the world would be,
Without you son, but with sorrow?
So you got me back my soul,
But not without a cost,
It was you that he stole,
And now my life is lost,
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Posted Mar 6, 2007 12:29 am PT
Wicked Awesome poem! Sad but awesome! I wish I could write poems but I get annoyed and my poems end up as stories so thats what I do instead 
Posted Mar 6, 2007 2:30 am PT
Thats a great Poem!!! Love it
Posted Mar 6, 2007 12:21 pm PT
cool i'm not at all creative or good at anything so i can't write poetry at all, i love that poem!!!
Posted Mar 6, 2007 10:29 pm PT
now that was good, but i think for dean it's a bit 2 sappy. buit still excellent
Posted Mar 8, 2007 9:15 pm PT
omg this is awesome!!!!
Posted Aug 10, 2007 8:02 pm PT
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