Tuesday, Feb 24, 2009
not sure where to go with this one yet, but this is what i have so far that i want to add to.
Broken Wings By Brianne Thibert
But these broken wings
have led me to fall
Again and again
i've been forced to crawl
and there's things in the night
when darkness comes
Won't you stitch them back on (the wings)
Before the daylight is gone?
I try to rebuild
a wall made of stone
Cuz sooner or later
We all sleep alone
When it comes down to it
it cuts to the bone
It gets old trying to fill
the void with a phone
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Posted Feb 24, 2009 12:20 pm PT
wow i like that, thanks! that's a very sweet poem.
Posted Feb 24, 2009 1:58 pm PT
Nice one, guys!
Posted Feb 24, 2009 2:17 pm PT
This is very expressive to me. And DJ's response was fabulous as well.
Posted Feb 25, 2009 6:02 am PT
DJ takes a bow in front of boromir, vic and breezy 
Posted Feb 25, 2009 6:40 am PT
yes its meant to be expressive. one of these days i might have time to actually sit down and finish it lol
Posted Feb 25, 2009 9:06 am PT
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Friends
My Friends
dj_mrt
I`ll fix
your broken wings.
will stitch with my lips
every one of the feather
you have
you will raise beside me
instead of crawling
you`ll never open
your eyes to the darkness
again
as long as you stay
with me
as long as you let me
hold you in my heart
my warm heart
will make you sleep in peace
and when we sleep
holding each other
breathing each other
you`ll see my heartbeat
crashing every single stone
on your wall
one by one
because, there is no wall
for the one who has
love in the heart