Sunday, May 21, 2006
chapter 1
memory
a little boy walked down the street. he felt the warm air as he went by. the houses and buildings were on fire. people were yelling, chilldren crying, the little boy was looking. he yelled out every few seconds mom! mom! mom! no awser just fear.
"Aaaah!" he cried, as he gasped for air. "what happend, where am i?" he couldent quite bring it to himself to awser any of those questions. he felt pain coursing threw evey inch of his body.
it was mid day and he just wanted to know who and were he was, but there was nobody there just trees. everywere.
he started to walk limping and tripping a few feet. he felt like he had just gotten of a rollercoaster that spun arround in numerous circles.
he soon found a nice hollow log to sit on. he sat down and closed his eyes trying as hjard as he could to remember, "who am i ?."out of nowhere the bushes next to him started to move, he could here the dried out grass and sticks breaking.he helled his breath for countless seconds. untill somthing finally squeezed its way out. it was breathtaking a creature he could have sworn he never saw before, yet he felt as if he was his best friend from long ago. the creature looked like a dog but it had spikes on its back like a porcuepine and a nose like a fox. its back end was acualy split in to three seperat fox like tails and when it opend its mouth teeth like a sabertooths canines. it trotted up next to him and sniffed him like a dog usaully does(even though surly this was no dog). when it stopped he could have sworn it was at least 30 seconds untill finnaly, worm suliva started running down his neck his face. it was like a dogs lick only weter and..stickier.
the creature laid down next to him as if he was its owner. so he finnaly went along with it, "i'll call you kajin, (it was the fist thing that came to mind)" he said happy he had found a friend.
about two hour later of exploring and hunting the two of them sat down to cook there meel. "uuummm, ya. i cant eat raw meet" he said" i need a fire" the creature looked at him confused and sort of smiled as if laughing at him,then continued to eat. he looked at the creater, "thanks" he said. and he got up to see if he could find sumthing to make a fire with.
as he was looking, about thirty minutes later, he hered some talking so he ran over, a big mistake. there he found to people being blasted away by a third person who created a shock wave from his hand. then out of no were his body started to move, he couldent controll it. he walked twords the mistery person unable to do anything then he felt a surge of porwer rush threw his arm. he looked blue lightning was starting to spark.
he could see every thing thet went on but couldent stop himself his body was controllin itself. his body thifted his arm and the lightning doubled in size untill finally his body shot it out of his arm. the unknown person just turns arround and BOOM he got hit his body started disapeering, disinagrating at the electricities curse. finally after the person was completly gone. he got in controll of his body again. he freeked out and ran he didnt no were, but he ran and cept running untill finnaly he tripped.
he sat on the ground half crying half compleatly mortified. untill the creature came up next to him.
after a few more houres of setaling down and relizing he needed shelter to survive he made a hut out of sticks and mud and branches from the giant kunicka tree. he found some flint to creat a fire. so he and his new ( maby old) freind ate.
the sun was just setting when out of no were to guys ran up next to him and started to hug him and yell" we found you!! we found you!!" he kicked them and broke away. who are you and what do you want. the two men looked at eatchother and said "he got hit on the head."
they triedto tell him they new eatchother, but he couldent remember so they said "ok fine maby it will come back but, its getting dark and this isnt going to hold so come with us we have tents. what is there to loose" nowing kajin was with him he went.
they walk only about 1000 feet then over a stree m and had gotten to a tent about 12 feet high and 12 feet wide "come in " they said sound like they were playing a joke on some one. as they got in they showed him were he was to sleep.
minuts turnd to hours and it was dark out.they all sat up talking"so where are we?" he asked they said"were in calamious" he asked "weres that?" they said it is its own place , he did not understand. "look they said its getting late so we will tell you somthing of THE past. "
"long ago there was a powerful army, called the gratons, they were the strongest and most grusome of all worriors. well, one day a new spiecies was found he was a graton warrior him self. this new creature had , well special powers, he could creat energy from his meer arm. the army new if hecould controll his power he would become to strong and overcome the army. so the leader made him a slave, a meer wepon. after a while the creture had enough. he atacked the army. then ran away as far as he could he thought he was a monster. he called himself a mage. after a while more mages started to apeer. thre ended up being twice as many mages as the graton army. and they new, the gratons thought of a plan and waged war against the mages. the gratons set up a special ambush that split the mages up half and half then the gratons set a fire to one half and completly burnt them to smoldering ashes. the other half ran away nowing they would loose .they new if they stuck to gether they woulld all be mourdered so they split up in fours. they would fight like that and wen they had babies would put them in to a group of four. and it kept going on like that. untill us. we were put in a group and foght in many wars untill finally we were no mach we gotten are selves into somthing we shouldent have and we fought. one of are partners was shot an arrow right inbetwwen the eyes, died instantly the next got hit in the head with a rock he was bleeding and bleeding bad we thoght he was dead so we left we met up and got are selfs 2 more partners. well the one who got hit with a rock wasent dead and was captured. but he agrred to be a weapon for the army .he lied and killed the ruler becming the leader. now he kils all mages for revenge. "
"its late we will continue later, oh and by the way ure name is paublo.
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