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Thursday, Jun 26, 2008

Woot,2nd chapter^^

Warning,rated 14+ for action/sci-fi violence,crude humor,blood,and language.

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Omnitrix Force

Chapter 2:

"Image display."Rizoth said,and an image of the approaching ship appeared in the window he was looking out of."Oh no......"Rizoth said under his breath.The ship was long and straight,with strange symbols along it.Rizoth hopped onto the floor,and scurried to a containment sphere in the middle of the ship.

"Keyboard."Rizoth commanded,and a computerized keyboard appeared in front of him.He entered a long and complicated password quickly,and the containment sphere opened.Inside,an omnitrix identical to the original levitated."I have to get rid of this thing quickly...."

Then,an explosion cut him off,and shook the ship.Strange aliens began to board the Galvan's ship."Open up!!"One yelled in a scraggly voice,banging on the door to the main hull."Not a chance....Defense system on!"Rizoth yelled,and drones began to attack the aliens,but they got rid of them easily.

"Eject Omnitrix!!!"Rizoth commanded the computer,and the containment sphere sealed up again,and shot the Omnitrix out of the ship.But,not before another explosion hit the ship.The Omnitrix was caught in the explosion,and shattered into 5 pieces,meteoring towards the nearest planet,earth.

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Wow,long typing.Chapter 3 coming soon,and tell me what you think!

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