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Saturday, Oct 31, 2009

(Sorry guys. The Spiderman idea will have to wait for another time. I'm really blocked on it. Instead here's a halloween feeling story to help you out. Be warned, it's a doozy.)

"Why do i feel like everyone hates me?"

"I'm gone. I don't exist anymore."

Here i am. Floating here. What's going on? Where am I? Why do I feel like this?

"You hate me don't you?"

"WHAT IS THIS?!"

Okay. I just need a break. I need to find out where i am. What i am.

I head toward the door. I feel so light. Something's wrong.

"Yeah. I hate me too."

This is weird. Is this a party?

The DJ is singing. I still don't know what's going on. Everyone appears to be a different pigment. And they're missing their feet. Are they dead? Am I?

"THIS IS YOUR DJ!!! IT'S TIME FOR A PARTY!!!! HERE'S A GOOD ONE FOR ALL YOU DEAD FOLK OUT THERE!!!"

I go down, or rather i'm pulled down. People with half their skulls out sing the song while i'm pushed into them. Eventually, i go out a door.

Was it a door? I need to find some people. (End Song)

I keep walking. Before long i reach the main entrance. I leave at last. I see a girl. She looks so familiar.

Who is she? Why can't i remember?

I run to her. Trying to catch up. I finally catch her, and i reach out to tap her. Suddenly she dissapears. I'm standing there looking straight ahead.

What happened to me? Wait what?

I feel an odd weight on me. I look at my hand. It isn't my hand. It's the girls. I look around for some form of finding out who i was. Or who she was.

"You can't bring yourself to say it? Go ahead. You hate me. Say it."

HELP ME!!!!

"SAY IT!!!!"

OK OK!! Stop freaking out. Just find someone.

I walk in the girl's shoes down to the town.

Who're you?!

What the?

What're you doing in my head?

I DON'T KNOW!!

My eyes change color with whoever's thinking. Green for the girl, Black for me.

"I'M SO TIRED OF YOU!!!"

Can you help me?

Who are you?

I don't know. That's the problem.

"I'LL KILL YOU!!!"

Suddenly, i feel a push. I can't get these thoughts out of my head.

WHAT'S GOING ON?!

I'll just find something to do. This is just so boring.

I fell out of the girl's mind, but i still hear her thoughts inside me. She continues to walk, apparently ignoring me and what i had done in her mind. Why was i thinking like her. And who was this who kept screaming in my head?

"I hate you too."

I keep walking. Everywhere i look, i see more dead folk, and living men and women. Where was i?

To be Continued......

Posted by Zamxus, 5:34am
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Um....kay.
Posted Oct 31, 2009 6:03 am PT
Okie dokie then......
Posted Oct 31, 2009 7:14 am PT
Posted Oct 31, 2009 8:47 am PT
Uh...okay
Posted Oct 31, 2009 11:40 am PT
Sorry i was going to put it up but i had to go out for Halloween, so i forgot. I'll put it up when i can. But now it's time to eat some pizza so see you guys later.
Posted Oct 31, 2009 4:03 pm PT
Here's a better story for you guys. Sorry to keep you waiting.
Posted Oct 31, 2009 8:35 pm PT
Yo Zane. Check out mine if you would and see what you think.
Posted Oct 31, 2009 9:28 pm PT
Awesome, it truely gives you the sence that you are there in the story. ^.^ Keep up the good writing, and such.
Posted Oct 31, 2009 11:01 pm PT
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