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Tuesday, Oct 24, 2006

Each time I plant a garden,
The flowers always die.
I hope and pray when each Spring comes,
Yet every time I try
I'm left with nothing in my hands
And once again I cry.

Enough! I'm done! I'll plant no more!
I vow that I shall be
Strong and independant, hoping
Nevermore to see
The blooming nor the dying
Of a dream not meant to be.

"Come, Winter, lay upon my soul
"Your deepest, coldest snow.
"Though I was meant for warmth and light,
"For love and laughter, know
"That I shall steel my heart against
"Expecting love to grow."

Now under Winter's covering
It's safe and cool and dark.
No light nor sound can penetrate,
Much less can leave its mark.
And I in peaceful solitude
Lie sleeping in my heart.

And there I would have surely stayed,
But one great ray of light
Broke through to touch my heart and mind
And wake me from my night.
Though I resisted, it was strong
And swiftly won the fight.

Now once again Springtime has come
And I feel born anew.
In wonder, I behold a tree
Where once frail flowers grew.
For me, the best was saved for last:
My love, this tree is you.

Posted by Yarnalee, 7:45am
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-marvels- Oh, Susan-spoon, that's beautiful!

It does remind me of you. ^^ And you're so poetic. I'm envious. I can't write poetry for squat.
Posted Oct 24, 2006 9:22 am PT
Wow. That was good! Real good!
Posted Oct 24, 2006 2:48 pm PT
Thanks, Dani and Kate. I was inspired - and I hope he reads it soon and tells me what he thinks!!!

(But privately, dear.)
Posted Oct 24, 2006 3:45 pm PT
Wow, deep, but really good!!!!!
Posted Oct 24, 2006 3:46 pm PT
Bravo Susan. Very good, very deep. I think that you definitely have talent
Posted Oct 24, 2006 8:10 pm PT
Thanks, Felicia and Paco. Your appreciation is deeply appreciated.
Posted Oct 25, 2006 5:56 am PT
Good poem, Susan, I really like it.
Posted Oct 25, 2006 7:55 am PT
Wow Susan. This metaphoric poem is fantastic. I really like it.
Posted Oct 25, 2006 7:58 am PT
Thank-you, Christopher. It means a lot to me that you like it.

And thanks to you, too, Jenn! I love being complimented on my writing.
Posted Oct 25, 2006 9:03 am PT
Beautiful Susan, really beautiful. With all that talent, I bet you could publish a book of poetry.
Posted Oct 26, 2006 3:36 pm PT
Thanks, Mercyangel. Yeah, the book will feature my version of Kwan's poem.
Posted Oct 27, 2006 6:06 am PT
Susan... that was beautiful. You're a great poet.
Posted Oct 28, 2006 10:44 am PT
Great Poem it beautiful
Posted Oct 28, 2006 1:04 pm PT
Thanks, Lexi and Carolyn. I really appreciate your kind words.
Posted Oct 29, 2006 8:17 pm PT
*Tears* So...beautiful and deep...Brilliant, Susan, really brilliant
Posted Nov 4, 2006 4:15 pm PT
heh, I thought at first you said "My life IS a metaphor." it struck me as funny. uh... wow. anyways... Love the poem. it's so... undefinable. I wish I could write poems, but I can't rhyme. *sobs* People at FF.net would say you deserve a cookie or something, but I don't give out cookies, I give out muffins. chocolate chip muffins. want one? You deserve it...
Posted Nov 8, 2006 5:34 pm PT
thats really good
Posted Dec 11, 2006 1:43 am PT
wow! i love poetry and love to write it myself, and i found this to be super! love how it rhymes, and the words and what it says, how'd you think it all up!? great job!
Posted Dec 29, 2006 6:32 am PT
WOAH. That was amazing. You have a brilliant talent, continue to harness it.
Posted Mar 19, 2007 11:48 am PT
You're such an awesome writer Susan. I love your imagination
Posted Apr 13, 2007 3:33 pm PT
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