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Wednesday, Aug 29, 2007

This poem is not easy to talk about it, well just read it!!!

The day has been already and i forget it.. But i will do this anyway. Lets remember the people who died in HiroShima and NagaSaki! This poem is for them!

This can happen again! The poem namn is "Angel In Sunrise" is one of my powerful words i have ever write so far.. Hmm i have another one too!!..

Take care of each other, you hear me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By Magnus Strid

Was written between! 25/8 - 29/8 - 2007

Weapons in sunrise
see you die in awful war
love in sunrise
can't take your smile away from you
feel the rush in the field
bombing you to stoneage
feels like a weird dream
soon can you feel the pain
heaven moves faster in time
feel the power close
darkside not far away
sometimes you can feel the darkside
there will always be sunrise in your face
angel in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air
angel in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air

nuclear weapons in the sky
dropping down in sunrise
where start your believes
she weres a cross to me
in sunrise we kiss
a new HiroShima in sunrise
that will be awful in sunrise
where can we hide
no where just run
in sunrise i run with you
feeling the day being awful
where is the blue sky
winter around you
in sunrise the snow falling down
feel the darkside around the world
sometimes you can feel the darkside
there will always be sunrise in your face
angel in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air
angel in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air

Someday the snow is falling down
like an nuclear weapon from the blue sky
rush hour you live through
to much to do
kids plays around you
see the man of love enter the home
there you and him live together
sunrise HiroShima my tears falling and falling
sometimes you can feel the darkside
there will always be sunrise in your face
angel in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air
angel in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air

Someday we could live in peace
but some others don't want to live in peace
no freedom in life
rule by another power
rule by darkside
armys in field and desert
in landscape and close to your home
they will fly over you too
HiroShima in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air
angel in sunrise
HiroShima in sunrise
and i falling down for mercy
cloud swamp rising in to the air
angel in sunrise

Category: Writing
Posted by SWEToryu, 12:48am
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Nice poem
Posted Aug 29, 2007 10:06 am PT
great poem! i love it!
Posted Aug 29, 2007 10:39 am PT
Great poem.
Posted Aug 29, 2007 1:30 pm PT
Princess-peach: Thanks Princess!!!! I'm so glad u like it!

Black_Grace: Thanks Black_Grace Glad u like it i mean love it!

DemonSlayerZea: Thanks Demon!

Thank u all!!
Posted Aug 29, 2007 10:24 pm PT
Aww, that's so sad! You are so sweet though!

Lone_Shark died too.
Posted Aug 29, 2007 10:48 pm PT
sweet_abbie: Thanks Abbie!!! Thats sad to about Lone_Shark!!!!..
Posted Aug 29, 2007 10:50 pm PT
I never knew Lone_Shark, but losing all these people makes me appreciate the people around me more.
Posted Aug 29, 2007 10:51 pm PT
Oh ok..
Posted Sep 1, 2007 2:14 pm PT
Aww, you okay?
Posted Sep 1, 2007 2:24 pm PT
Awwwwwwwww!! I know it's hard when someone you love dies. I know how you feel Baby, and writing poetry is a great way to express your sadness. Awww, I'll be here to get you through this, okay? XOXO Jane
Posted Sep 1, 2007 2:32 pm PT
sweet_abbie: Yeah i'm ok!

sweet_jane: My sweetness! You like the poem honey?
Posted Sep 5, 2007 12:29 am PT
I love your poetry!
Posted Sep 5, 2007 11:14 am PT
sweet_jane: Awwww! So sweet you are honey! Is it one of the best i've have made? Or? Hmm publish?
Posted Sep 5, 2007 11:53 am PT
I can't choose the best I think they're all wonderful!
Posted Sep 5, 2007 7:42 pm PT
sweet_jane: I know is hard to pick one, is the same for me too!
Posted Sep 5, 2007 11:49 pm PT
Check out my latest poem Sweetie
Posted Sep 6, 2007 12:40 am PT
Alright sweetie!!
Posted Sep 7, 2007 5:50 am PT
Thank you Baby!
Posted Sep 7, 2007 1:47 pm PT
It was sad and beautiful!
Posted Sep 7, 2007 1:55 pm PT
Awww!! *Huggy-kissy*
Posted Sep 7, 2007 2:37 pm PT
Awww!! *Kisses*
Posted Sep 21, 2007 3:36 pm PT
Awwwwwwwww!! You're so cute!!!
Posted Sep 21, 2007 4:05 pm PT
Ohh Magnobaby!!! Guess who!!! *Giggles*
Posted Sep 28, 2007 6:08 pm PT
So are you too!

It's Jane eh?
Posted Oct 1, 2007 11:34 am PT
Yes that was me
Posted Oct 1, 2007 1:58 pm PT
I knew it!!
Posted Oct 2, 2007 10:15 am PT
*Giggles*

Oh, check my latest blog. I have a surprise for you!
Posted Oct 2, 2007 10:25 am PT
*Hihi*

Hmmm i wonder what that can be!! What do you call it?? The blog?
Posted Oct 12, 2007 1:17 pm PT
It's her Dedication Blog Part One thing... I think.
Posted Oct 13, 2007 11:47 pm PT
I found it honey!
Posted Oct 14, 2007 9:44 am PT
Awww you called my baby sister Honey! Awww, so sweet!
Posted Oct 14, 2007 10:39 am PT
Your poems are so sweatery! YOU ROCK!!! *Hugs*
Posted Oct 25, 2007 9:20 am PT
Aww You and your sweaters you silly little sweater lover baby you!
Posted Oct 26, 2007 12:59 am PT
Aww, you're so sweet Magnus!

I don't wanna put a lot of pressure on you cuz I know you don't get to come on here a lot. Will you check my blog that says "Save Jane?" I need your help.
Posted Oct 26, 2007 7:13 pm PT
Hi! You must be Magnus! I'm Gabriella! I heard about you and I wanted to get to know you!
Posted Nov 11, 2007 3:30 am PT
sweet_gabriella: Hi There! Ok lets get to know each other then! So who are you? How are you doing?

tgray19: Thanks Tiffany!
Posted Nov 16, 2007 2:17 pm PT
Sweetie, I made a very special blog for you!
Posted Nov 20, 2007 10:01 pm PT
Beautiful poem.
Posted Nov 21, 2007 8:49 am PT
Aww. isn't it? He's wonderful!
Posted Nov 21, 2007 10:19 am PT
emeraldmile: Thank you so much! Glad you like it!

Sweet_jane: THank you honey it made me glad!
Posted Nov 30, 2007 12:21 pm PT
Aww, you make me glad!
Posted Nov 30, 2007 12:43 pm PT
Aww, hey you make me glad too!
Posted Dec 2, 2007 11:25 am PT
Awwwwwwwww!! You're so precious!
Posted Dec 8, 2007 3:57 pm PT
Magnus I miss you sooo much!!!
Posted Dec 11, 2007 2:33 pm PT
Heeey Magnus! What's up bro?
Posted Dec 12, 2007 12:14 am PT
sweet_jane: I miss you too Jane!!!!...

sweet_abbie: Hey Abbie. Is ok, what's up bro?
Posted Dec 16, 2007 12:26 pm PT
Hehehe, I love talking to you

Oh, and "bro" is just short for "brother."
Posted Dec 16, 2007 8:11 pm PT
LoL I almost want to say you guys are cute, but then I'll lose man points.

Screw it, you guys are cute.
Posted Dec 29, 2007 11:57 pm PT
Aww, thank you very much, and I don't think that will make you lose man points. That was very kind of you. God bless you.
Posted Jan 2, 2008 12:50 am PT
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