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Wednesday, Nov 22, 2006

This poem goes to the one i love and for my friends who has not an easy time, there people are mean and not nice.. I hope my words makes you strong.

They don't know what they are doing
They hurt people
See heaven burn in flame
When i save you
From the pain and fear
When i save you
From the pain and fear

People around like friends
Who is caring about you
I care about my love
And her friends too
See heaven burn in flame
See it burn in red
When i save you
From the pain and fear
When i save you
From the pain and fear

All the time i'm with you
there is no fear
there is no pain
not feeling down
when she sees me in red sky
coming down to you
taking you away
See heaven burn in flame
See it burn in red
When i save you
From the pain and fear
When i save you
From the pain and fear
through the landscape we run
there is no flame in the sky
see it be in blue
it's falling down snow on her face
see her shine like an angel
when i save you to the light
when heaven dose not burn no more
when i save you to the light
when heaven dose not burn no more

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Posted Nov 22, 2006 9:04 am PT
well I'll get to the point I ain't no poet, me not like poetry either. but I get the idea behind it and the hole poem is good, though I'm no expert. Hope the person you wrote it for likes it. Take care both you and your friend bye
Posted Nov 22, 2006 9:18 am PT
He wrote it for everyone.

Thanks SWEToryu! You are soooooooo sweeeeeeeeet!
Posted Nov 22, 2006 1:47 pm PT
That is beautiful.
Posted Nov 22, 2006 6:36 pm PT
Beautiful poen!
Posted Nov 22, 2006 9:18 pm PT
Very sweatery! Sorry, I had too much soda.

I love your poem.
Posted Nov 22, 2006 11:29 pm PT
Naruto:

phucvantran: I understand how you mean! ..But if you have a hard time you know it's for you too!!!!! ..Glad you like the poem my friend!!!
Well take care of you too! You are my friend too!!!

tgray19: Yupp it's for everyone here also, my friends! Thank you Tiffany! ..Yeah it looks like you have to much of soda! queensrp: Thank you

Bloody_Kimono_: Thanks hon ..So happy you like it Thora!
Posted Nov 23, 2006 4:15 am PT
Nice real nice. Get these poems published .
Posted Nov 23, 2006 8:33 am PT
Awwwwwwww I love your poems!
Posted Nov 23, 2006 10:27 am PT
That's so awesome thanks And so beautiful
Posted Nov 23, 2006 3:00 pm PT
Awww!
Posted Nov 23, 2006 3:01 pm PT
I love you!
Posted Nov 24, 2006 2:42 pm PT
OmegaOrtega: Thanks buddy!!! ...Hmm maybe!

Princess-peach: Thank you! ...Don't cry!!!

sweetojo: Madi

sweet_jane: Good honey that you like it!!! ...I love you too!
Posted Nov 24, 2006 3:01 pm PT
Awwwwwww!
Posted Nov 24, 2006 3:28 pm PT
My honey-boo!
Posted Nov 24, 2006 5:27 pm PT
My baby-boo!
Posted Nov 24, 2006 8:51 pm PT
I love you Daddy Magnus.
Posted Nov 24, 2006 10:38 pm PT
whats up
Posted Nov 25, 2006 12:02 pm PT
Hey! It's me Tiifany! I created a new account to write blogs for my boyfriend.
Posted Nov 25, 2006 11:01 pm PT
I'm crying because I'm happy Would you rather me cry because I'm sad?
Posted Nov 27, 2006 1:58 am PT
Princess-Peach you're so funny.
Posted Nov 27, 2006 5:47 am PT
tgray19: I love you too my litttle girl!
baldor13: Doing just fine! How are you?..
ILuvYouSoMuch: Oh tiffany eh!
Princess-peach: Noooo you shall cry when you are happy!!
sweet_jane: Yeah she is so so so funny!
Posted Nov 27, 2006 6:04 am PT
Oh my god you are so sweet!*Huuuuuuuuugs*
Posted Nov 27, 2006 12:37 pm PT
tgray19: HEEEYYY calm down! ...Don't cry! *Hugssss*
Posted Nov 28, 2006 3:49 am PT
Awwwwww so sweet!!!
Posted Nov 28, 2006 12:54 pm PT
I know. He's such a darling.
Posted Nov 28, 2006 5:10 pm PT
Moonlightway: Thank you...you are sweet too!

Sweet_Jane: My darling!!!
Posted Nov 29, 2006 5:23 am PT
Awwww you sweet little thing!
Posted Nov 29, 2006 7:32 am PT
you're so sweet to honey!!!!
Posted Nov 30, 2006 5:21 am PT
Awwww my wittle precious.
Posted Nov 30, 2006 6:24 am PT
My precious, my love!
Posted Nov 30, 2006 7:09 am PT
That's really sweet.
Posted Nov 30, 2006 6:02 pm PT
Yes it is!!...
Posted Dec 1, 2006 4:16 am PT
(Giggles sooooooo sweetly)
Posted Dec 1, 2006 6:54 am PT
So cute you are honey!
Posted Dec 1, 2006 7:26 am PT
Awwwwwwww! So sweeet you are Baby!
Posted Dec 1, 2006 2:40 pm PT
That was so cool and it touched me personally. I am going through a hard time and it certainly made me feel better. There is just so much in the world to find, to see.
Posted Dec 2, 2006 10:18 pm PT
Yeah it's a wonderful poem.

Honey I don't think you realize how happy you make people. If anyone says you're not a friend or gets mad at you, then they're stupid, and I will beat their butts for you Honey. Hey, we're best friends. I've got your back.
Posted Dec 3, 2006 11:23 am PT
I don't feel happy right now
Posted Dec 4, 2006 1:51 am PT
sweet_jane: You're so sweet my babe!!!!

mrsxbox: Good it made you feel much better Shelley!!! Yeah and i agree with you!

sweetojo: Amazing poem! ...I'am so happy to make other happy! Glad you have my back! ..Yes we're best friends!!!

Princess-peach: Oh no, what has happened?
Posted Dec 4, 2006 4:54 am PT
Awwww is my princess okay?
Posted Dec 4, 2006 6:35 am PT
I hope she is ok!!!
Posted Dec 4, 2006 7:03 am PT
Me too Baby. I hate to see my little princess in pain. *Gives Princess-Peach a big hug*
Posted Dec 4, 2006 7:13 am PT
So sweet you are honey and nice and caring! That is what i like about you! *Hugs also Princess-Peach*
Posted Dec 4, 2006 7:20 am PT
Awwww I love being sweet!
Posted Dec 4, 2006 7:28 am PT
So sweet you are honey!
Posted Dec 5, 2006 5:17 am PT
Sweet!

I say the poem is good
Posted Dec 5, 2006 7:52 am PT
Yes it's very good. His poems bring tears to my eyes.
Posted Dec 5, 2006 3:38 pm PT
LeenaParvin: THanks Leena!!! Nice to see you!!!

sweet_jane: happy tears!!
Posted Dec 6, 2006 4:46 am PT
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