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Wednesday, Jun 27, 2007

A little poem I wrote for my french class

I translated it and made it rime wich was the hardest part but hey enjoi!

Minutes

You whom like sand in an hourglass,

Mighty one we watch you fall,

From high, yourdrop will never last,

NO human can stop you behind that wall of glass.

A glimpse of our future you give,

One that is unique to everyone,

Bad news maybe we won't forgive,

Why us,mediocre persons?

Taking hits, making me weak,

Day after day, week after week

Time has come for me to depart,

My body they ripped apart.

Even dead, burried in my grave

They won't let me rest,

No one can escape their attack,

They are like a pest.

And that is it. Hope you enjoyed it! My translation sucked but I did the best I can It is better in french than english and more meaningfull too.

well

it was (-Patrick-) aka Metroid1491

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ok.... cool, I guess....
Posted Jun 28, 2007 4:07 am PT
Nice... but the pest part at the end is a mood killer.
Posted Jun 28, 2007 9:07 am PT
yeah your right I don't know what I had in mind when I wrote it but thats the way it came out
Posted Jun 29, 2007 6:46 pm PT
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