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Monday, Oct 26, 2009

Characters involved:

Aidan - Aidan

Leon - Desulated

Nicole - Twilightlullaby

Courtney - Courtney

Jet E. Evil - pspitus

Red - Red

Dragon - Michael

Squirrel - Fur

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Finally! It felt like they had been on that stupid plateau forever! They were finally back though. Well...not back. Leon had insisted that they all go to his stupid facility. Nicole wasn't freaking out this time, so they actually had to listen to him blabber on and on about cyborg commandos and how they would soon head into space to see if they could find life on other planets using wormh-blah blah blah. Aidan was so bored with this guy that he contemplated slashing random machines and projects just for the fun of getting into trouble. Courtney seemed to be listening intently, maybe he should. What was that?

"-three days we will be launching the first band of cyborgs into space, along with me and Commander Smith," Leon said to everyone.

"Oh, that sounds so interesting!" Courtney said, "May we come?"

"Umm...If...proper preparations are made I suppose," Leon said.

"Us? In space?" Michael said.

"The real estate in space is pretty expensive," Mr. Evil said.

"There is no real estate in space," Red said.

"There will be soon though," Mr. Evil said, a maniacal smile coming to his face.

"Umm...Okay..." Leon said, "Er...I only thought I was going to bring Courtney, Nicole, and Aidan though." Squirrel glared at him. "And umm...what was your name again?"

"Squirrel." Squirrel said, angry that someone could possibly forget her.

"I'm sorry, but shouldn't we be focusing on destroying the people who have continually tried to destroy us?" Nicole said.

"Umm..." Leon said.

"And why should we trust cyborgs when that's all we seem be getting attacked by lately?" Nicole said.

"Er..."

"And why isn't Ben here? He has just as much of a right as these three," Nicole said, pointing at Jet, Michael, and Red, "to be here." No one answered. Nicole looked around. Everyone seemed to be very depressed about this, except for Aidan, Courtney, Leon, and herself.

"He died." Red said simply.

"Oh."

Awkward silence set in as they walked deeper into C.R.E.A, the Cyborg Reasearch and Experimentation Agency. The entire building was made of what everyone thought was glass, but was probably some other crazy substance that was "Top Secret." It was very odd to walk along a floor made of glass even on the first floor, you could see down to the ground and it felt like you were floating. You could also see into every room, unless it was "Top Secret." Black curtains surrounded these important experiments. Most of the rooms were filled with creepy humanoid robots.

"Those aren't cyborgs, cyborgs are part human part machine," Leon pointed out, so no one would become confused. This didn't break the silence. As they kept walking, they finally got to a glass elevator. As they ascended the floors, they could see themselves going away from the ground. Now the floating felt real. The doors finally opened upon the 9th floor, which was something like a conference room. They could see the plains all around them for miles. Leon took out a card, put it in front of a light in the elevator, and suddenly they kept going up. There was no more floors after this, where could they possibly be going? Everyone looked at each other behind Leon's back with looks of fear in their eyes. They went up for about 12 minutes. The doors opened. Leon stepped onto thin air. Suddenly they all realized it was another glass room, with no decorations making it completely invisible. It was floating with nothing beneath it. No one else stepped out. Leon pressed a small glass button at the farthest wall in the room and suddenly, it was filled with tons of filing cabinets, and a carpet. Everyone jumped, the objects had just appeared.

"What the hell is going on?" Aidan said. Leon opened a filing cabinet and took out a brown paper folder.

"This is all the information we have on them," Leon said, taking out a bunch of paper, held together by a bent paper clip. He handed the paper to Nicole and she gasped as she read the horrors before her.

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Teehee, you have to wait.

Sorry for the cliffhanger, couldn't resist.

I umm...have no further comments. Oh, I made C.R.E.A. in chapter umm...5? So no, I'm not stealing Fur's CEAR.

Posted by Marrium1, 7:43pm
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Ooh, this could get good. XD
Posted Oct 26, 2009 8:50 pm PT
pretty good
Posted Oct 26, 2009 9:42 pm PT
Dude what are the characters thinking? They can't trust Leon. j/k j/k
Posted Oct 26, 2009 11:01 pm PT
You know, (and this is NOT criticism) you and Fur are both writing these stories...but they're actually more like screenplays, with all the dialogue involved. It's more like reading a script. I think you both have a good start on writing plays or movies if that idea is even interesting at all.
Posted Oct 27, 2009 6:35 am PT
Yeah, I figured you made CREA up before I did CEAR, I just couldn't think of anything else to put in my story. Besides, Des has too many things we have to remember in the Adventure Threads already, so I wanted to make it simple.
Yes. Very good chapter indeed.
Posted Oct 27, 2009 8:25 am PT
Ooh, it's getting quite exciting, Marrium! I'm looking forward to the next part!
Posted Oct 27, 2009 3:23 pm PT
Interesting! Can't wait for more!!
Posted Oct 27, 2009 6:00 pm PT
Hey! Why wasn't I upset about Ben getting creamed? Him and me are really tight, man! I'd probably be crying like Lexie! Anyway, good chapter. Would've been better with more Aidan.
Posted Oct 27, 2009 7:33 pm PT
@ Aidan - You guys were in Utah on a plateau when Ben died, you didn't even know about it until then...
Posted Oct 27, 2009 8:56 pm PT
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