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Wednesday, Oct 7, 2009

Characters Involved:

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pspitus - Jet E. Evil

Slyfur - Squirrel

Red - Red

Dragon - Michael

Stalpno - Ben

Courtney - Courtney

Desulated - Leon

Aidan - Aidan

Twilightlullaby - Nicole

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He could feel them. He could tell they were near. His senses, finely tuned to detect the slightest scent, could smell them. He could taste the air they had exhaled. He was going to kill them. How fun. He liked it best when they didn't know it. When he came in, the surprise on their faces, that was his favorite part. He could also hear them. There were three who weren't supposed to be there. It was just supposed to be the two who had escaped captivity. They were his property. They belonged to him. He was going to get them back, one way or another. One plan or another. He could see them. Gazing out the window, he saw four stupid children, and one who could pass off as an adult. The kids were lanky enough that he knew they were in their teens. He saw his property sitting there, completely unaware. Unaware of how they were going to be enslaved once again. The upstairs window was unlocked. He almost laughed. It was too easy. he got through the window without making a sound. He was in some sort of bedroom. He saw a picture of his prey next to two other girls. Those two were his predators. He hated them. He knew their names, Nicole and Courtney, two of those deadly weapons of those on high. He was the predator and, at the moment, the prey. He would be sure to turn that around. Sneaking, quiet, he opened the door and crept to the staircase. He threw down a flash bang. He didn't like to play with his food.

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Mr. Evil was quite, how is the best way to describe this, odd. He had many stories, even if half of them weren't true. In fact he had excellent stories. Squirrel actual smiled quite often around him. Red had a little attitude, contradicted some of Mr. Evil's stories, and was quite nice to everyone else. Michael was very nice and didn't say anything out of line, he was funny when he wanted to be though. Suddenly everything in the room went white, and intense screeching filled everyones' ears. Squirrel couldn't see or hear. She could still touch, taste, and smell though. Suddenly she touched a person, it was Ben. Ben was so skinny Squirrel could tell it was him. Then she touched something else. A knife. Quick as a whip, she twisted it out of the assassin's hand. Then, she realized her other hand was touching nothing. Ben had moved somewhere. Vision came back in sprawls, and she finally saw the assassin. It was a man wearing a white shirt and white sweats. Then Squirrel noticed something odd. He was albino. His eyes were red and his skin was an intense shade of white. He was bald which only made him look more freakish. He seemed familiar. She was about to stab him with the knife when, he was gone. As soon as he had come, he had disappeared. Where was Ben? Then she heard someone shout, "Oh my god!" it was Mr. Evil, which was completely out of character as he was usually unsurprised by everything. Then Squirrel looked where he was looking, the floor. She saw him. Ben. Ben was bleeding profusely, his eyes wide, his face still shocked. Unmoving. Ben was...dead.

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Courtney sure did know how to think on her feet. or in the air for that matter. She had already shouted protect, but she couldn't create a barrier big enough to stop her hurtling flight. "That's it," she thought, "FLIGHT! She quickly flipped through her book and found the right spell in two seconds flat. She gained the correct mind set for this spell, they all had a different one. Then shouted, as you probably predicted, "FLIGHT!" She sprouted wings. They were very colorful and reminded her of an exotic bird. They didn't sprout out her back though, they grew off her arms. She flapped and found it quite easy to stay up and even go higher. Suddenly she heard a shot from the top of the plateau, and saw Leon hurtling down. She quickly performed a strength spell on herself, then flew up and caught him in her right wing. She could still fly with only one, especially after the strength boost. She could go up almost fifty feet each flap. Now she heard a barrage of shots and explosions. She heard Aidan shout, "OMG!" then a couple seconds later, as she reached the plateau's edge, Aidan unleashing the craziest attack she had ever seen.

"Holy-" She had almost swore, but Courtney had much higher standards than that. Nicole was lying on the ground. She was nearly dead, in a deep coma in fact. Courtney could fix that. With a quick spell, Nicole was standing, and then, Courtney collapsed. Too much magic, Courtney was limited.

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As Nicole came to, she saw Courtney collapse.

"What happened to her?" Nicole asked.

"I suppose she's completely out of energy," Leon said. Aidan was not too far away, on one knee, and breathing heavily.

"What's up with him?" Nicole asked.

"He just did the craziest move...well...ever..." Leon said still dazed from the cannon fire. Nicole noticed the wrecking ball was gone, Aidan had actually done something. Something cool apparently. "Do you have any way of transportation?" Nicole asked, "We need to get to our friends." Leon looked around and noticed his helicopter wasn't there. It was about ten thousand feet at the beginning of the plateau.

"I umm...did.." Leon said. That was a $3,000,000 copter, "I suppose I could...call and...get something else." He whipped out a cellphone and pressed and held one. Pretty soon he was ordering transportation out of the area. Nicole needed to see Squirrel. She was pretty sure something was coming.

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TAA DAA! I should have called this one, big paragraphs. Not much talking, but you know...a little actiony.

I am really glad for the support and comments you guys give me. Oh and if I get one person saying, "I don't understand," then please...for the love of god...find the first page and start from there or don't read it at all...oh if you don't understand the story then...well...I'm sorry...

Posted by Marrium1, 9:32pm
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Poor Ben. That whole scene was sort of scary.

And who's that guy who's coming after me? What does he want?
Posted Oct 8, 2009 2:39 am PT
I SMILE?! Holy ****!
Awesome, I have super fast reflexes!
Poor Ben...

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read the next one.
Posted Oct 8, 2009 1:47 pm PT
I don't understand.

............

And poor Ben We barely knew him
Posted Oct 8, 2009 7:19 pm PT
Why you make "Ben" die?
Posted Oct 8, 2009 8:19 pm PT
Good job, Marrium! And give me an ether so I can cast more spells!
Posted Oct 9, 2009 7:48 am PT
Nice! I just finished reading all 15 pages, and they were really good! I love them!

Lol, and I like the part in the last one where Ben thinks the car thefts were Squirrel's fault. I think I nearly fell off my chair, I was laughing so hard!
Posted Oct 11, 2009 1:46 pm PT
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