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Friday, May 16, 2008

Since mere sentences cannot describe the epicness of Avatar, I wrote a free form verse about the my favorite cartoon:

As I look out at the dripping rain,
I'll remember all the grief
Of waiting for the fill of life
To bury my sorrows in laughter.

A quarter of a score ago
Two geniuses had a dream, an image,
An epic story, a beautiful fairytale
That'll bring a tear to an eye.

Years have came and past,
And the dream has grown.
As the journey ends, I sit
With a heavy heart and peace of mind.

That will be it. All will be done.
Our story that has become life
Will end happily ever after.
But I tremble with that thought.

We've been through so much
With good and crushing days.
I'm happy things are closing
But I'm not sure how to feel.

Avatar wasn't a TV show,
It was inspiration.
It gave me hope, it gave me wisdom.
How could I forget the deed?

I'm sad to know that
We will soon part our ways,
But I understand life goes on.
And no one is ever really gone.

The sun is set and to close the day
I will leave with this tidbit of info:
I love you all so dearly
And no one shall be forgotten.

I'm not really into poetry, although I'll write it if I'm motivated. It takes even more motivation to get me to rhyme. But I will be working on an even better poem once I see the finale and work on my flow. As you can see, my poem is far from professional.

What is your favorite type of poetry?

Category: Writing
Posted by DeeDuck33, 7:01pm
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Nice poem LOL. I really don't read poetry much, but I've been told I have the heart of a poet, though I always deny it.
Posted May 16, 2008 8:06 pm PT
ZOMG, it's awesome! Seriously, it's brilliant. I normally hate poetry, too.

My favourite form is definitely Haiku.
Posted May 16, 2008 10:13 pm PT
Sonnets!

But this is great! Srsly!

And I love your profile banner!
Posted May 17, 2008 4:15 am PT
Thank you all!

The Haiku is one of my favorites.

And Shakespeare's sonnets are hilarious. (khalid13, thank you. It was given to me by the power of Google)
Posted May 17, 2008 9:24 am PT
Aren't they? I love his sonnets too!

"But thine eternal summer shall not fade
Nor shall death braggst thou wanderest in his shade"


One of my fav lines!
Posted May 17, 2008 2:32 pm PT
Btw, how old are ya, dee? If I'm not getting too personal, that is ...
Posted May 17, 2008 2:33 pm PT
I'm teenaged. (Is that a word?!!!!111one)
Posted May 17, 2008 5:44 pm PT
I'm guessing early teens than .

For a teenager, you're damned good with poetry.
Posted May 17, 2008 5:51 pm PT
Er... thanks, I guess? xP

Yes, I'm 14 years.
Posted May 18, 2008 5:29 am PT
LOL! Me too, but I'm awful at poetry, I wrote one for fanfiction.
Posted May 20, 2008 3:13 pm PT
Actually, that's not a half-bad idea. Poetry for fanfiction ... *muses*
Posted May 31, 2008 6:30 pm PT
Really nice poem, great work! I like all forms of poetry I don't necessarily have a favorite.
Posted Jul 1, 2008 3:21 pm PT
Very nice! Eloquently written! I'm pretty into poetry, it's mostly all free verse. I've never tried writing about a show, i'd imagine it'd be too hard lol.
Posted Jul 27, 2008 10:51 pm PT
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