No, the first one is horrible. Now it keeps getting better and better.

I dunno, it's pretty crappy.

why do you think it will be horrible? if you only think its going to be bad, then it will be bad

It will just be horrible, I know it.

I doubt that! Look, that's what makes writing so much fun is coming up with ideas until you find some that you like. Don't worry about what other "might" think. Just come up with tons of ideas that "you" like. Don't try to satisfy others. Write what makes you happy, and it won't be crappy.

Actually, most of the people who have read my story have liked it, but I've yet to be satisfied with it, that's my problem.

Well, what do you like to write about?

I have this one novel idea what I've been developing and trying to write, but I'm never satisfied when I write it.

Well, don't give up. One of these days, you'll write a novel, and when you read it, you'll say, "Wow! I wrote that!" You will write a novel you like one day. Never give up. The more you try, the better you get.

Thank you, that means a lot, and no I'm not being sarcastic.

I know.